Exercise 2

The “battle of the sexes” started with Adam and Eve; it will probably continue forever. The opinion that man are superior to women has long been accepted in many cultures; therefore, the feminist movement is trying to change this view. Feminists claim that boys and girls are exactly equal at birth but become unequal because of the way that was believed in education they are treated by society. Nevertheless, recent research contradicts the view that males and females are innately alike
1 個意見:
You may like to revise ", therefore" as "; therefore," in line 4.
The 'moreover' shuld be replaced with 'however' or 'nonetheless' or 'nevertheless'.
Good work. :)
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Ming Huei (John) Lin 提供, 於
2009年10月29日 晚上7:08
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